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Originally Posted by meeera
The book I would want - and I believe you're not planning to do a major structural edit, so this is pie in the sky, my editing wishes had I been your editor/advisor from the start - would be to start with the teenager on the run, right there in the dangerous moment, and to not know whether the baby is hers, or whether (and why) it is sick , because that's where the suspense is. I would want all that dropped gradually in clues, not necessarily in flashbacks, and definitely not in a prologue:earlier-body structure.
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That sounds like a cool book but yeah, it's not mine.