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With your first sentence and the title, I thought an erotic romance.
Now Gregg,
Here is my best advice,
Tell me in the blurb why I should read this story.
Pretty much the second you mention Annie, we know she is the main character.
Don't give me the whole story.
Give me a teaser.
Agreeing with Hitch again. When you get set on an idea, you quit listening to others.
Yes you know the book better than we do.
Make us want to read it, not feel like we have already read it.
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