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Originally Posted by Gregg Bell
Seventeen-year-old Annie Rebarchek is on the run with a baby. The police are closing in on her.
I wouldn't know how to do it.
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I think you just did it.
I understand you want to tell more about what kind of story they're getting, but that line right there is compelling.
Honestly it's the first blurb here that's made me interested to read the book (except for your reveal about the eugenics and stuff, which is cool, but you don't want to give that away.)
Those two short lines above say "young protagonist, vulnerable baby, crime, action, risk, suspense, punchy style, quick pace."
If that's the message you want to send, I say stop now and run with it.
If not, so be it. I haven't read the book, so I take your word for it.
ApK