Quote:
Originally Posted by Catlady
Hope you don't mind my saying this, but I think your versions are getting worse, not better, because of too many details being added.
|
Yes.
I'm going to pick two nits. One is "billionaire." Tired and silly and there just aren't that many, y'know? If you don't want "wealthy," and I agree that it might not say quite enough, how about something like "real estate mogul," "financial tycoon," "high-tech guru," or however he made his money?
I don't see how a job as a nanny is going to get anyone into college, frankly.