[Gregg Bell]

Originally Posted by Hitch

Yo:

I'll go with the first, but please take pity on us and fix the run-on sentences before you finalize it, thanks much. :-) Almost all of the sentences in which you see "and" occurring twice are run-ons. (I also prefer "thinks she's exaggerating" over "he tells her...," FWIW.)

Hitch

Thanks Hitch. I knew the giant sentences were gross.