You can't please all the readers all the time, but everyone now and then you get it right for some. Soon after
Unravelling was released it received this review on Smashwords:
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Hah! Well, that was just spectacular. The first pages were perfect, delicious social-awkwardness, and the ending was like a tart little cherry on top. An unexpected cherry. So... buried in whipped cream? Poor comparisons aside, I highly recommend this one. Poor little lizard.
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Seemed like a review worth gloating over, so I've been saving it up to share on here when my thread needed bumping.
Short story (4300 words).
Free at Smashwords.
You can also read it online at my website:
Unravelling.