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09-30-2015, 10:22 PM
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Gregg Bell
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Originally Posted by
Cinisajoy
A little better but I don't like the way this line reads.
. Just as she discovers there is she’s fired.
Okay, Cin. I'll take a look at it. Thanks.
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