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Old 09-30-2015, 03:26 PM   #10
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Originally Posted by marovada View Post
In my opinion it's too long and has superfluous description.

Maybe this:

Against her maternal instincts, Annie Rebarchek is forbidden to hold the baby she is being paid to look after. The cold, detached billionaire father insists it’s to encourage ‘self-soothing’, but the baby's jaundice colour and constant whining leads Annie to suspect that something more sinister is at play.

That would be 'jaundiced'.
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