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Originally Posted by marovada
In my opinion it's too long and has superfluous description.
Maybe this:
Against her maternal instincts, Annie Rebarchek is forbidden to hold the baby she is being paid to look after. The cold, detached billionaire father insists it’s to encourage ‘self-soothing’, but the baby's jaundice colour and constant whining leads Annie to suspect that something more sinister is at play.
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Thanks marovada. That is definitely a lot more concise. Appreciate it. I've put together a new one I'll post after this.