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Originally Posted by Gregg Bell
Okay, thanks everybody.
Here's a new one.

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Try making the title smaller, so it doesn't cover the eyes, and move your name up above the title. And it may be too strange, but rotate the subtitle ~25° and move it down, so it follows the wood in front of the childs mouth. Then it is also scewed in the same direction as the baby is, as if the statement is comming from the child.
(Just tossing out an idea here)