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I've received everything from 4 star reviews to stinging criticisms for this story - don't you just love your writer friends?
After quite a lot of consideration, I have altered the beginning (only slightly) to make the main character's motivations clearer - so if anyone downloaded it you might want to update the version you have through Kindle ....
please let me know if you think it's an improvement.
best,
Ann Girdharry
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