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Of all the examples so far, the grey scale one is the only image I actually like. It's a shame there's no tear in the eye to match the subtext (not that I mean any harm to the model).
As for the subtext, I agree with the comments saying that the "evil" prefix lends a horror touch. You may consider shortening it even further than the other suggestions so far, to something like: When he cries will anyone hear? or Who will listen when he cries? (ie. The "for help" seems redundant.)
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