Why on earth would you feel the need to change that? "Intercourse" simply means a connection or communication between people. It's an entirely normal and everyday word. Anyone who automatically associates "intercourse" with "sexual intercourse" is just ignorant.
It's one thing editing books for children; it's another thing entirely to pander to the ignorant adult. I'd strongly suggest leaving this one well alone.
Last edited by HarryT; 08-26-2015 at 02:48 AM.
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