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Originally Posted by BenG

It gets better after the 1st chapter, at least there is a more coherent moment to moment plot, though what has happened to the city is still unknown.
I'm about a third of the way through.


Not sure if this would be a spoiler since I'm only guessing.

Spoiler:

I think, though it's only a guess, that the more "poetical" parts are from a certain notebook.

Thanks for encouragement, I have managed to move past the first chapter on the the way to office this morning. I am really hoping it gets better.