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Old 08-17-2015, 09:11 AM   #25
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Originally Posted by din155 View Post
Damn, third attempt to restart the first chapter. It's slow and confusing.
It gets better after the 1st chapter, at least there is a more coherent moment to moment plot, though what has happened to the city is still unknown.
I'm about a third of the way through.


Not sure if this would be a spoiler since I'm only guessing.
Spoiler:
I think, though it's only a guess, that the more "poetical" parts are from a certain notebook.

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