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GrannyGrump · 08-11-2015, 04:41 AM

Well, Harry, I would have cheerfully have edited the wording, IF I could have thought of suitable substitutes in the second example I posted (see post # 15). But that one had me stonkered. My thesaurus failed me.

It's not too late, still. Would you have any suggestion for the three words highlighted in post # 15?

08-11-2015, 04:41 AM	#28
GrannyGrump Obsessively Dedicated... Posts: 3,221 Karma: 35037583 Join Date: May 2011 Location: PA {back in the usa!} Device: Sony PRS-T2, ADE on PC	Well, Harry, I would have cheerfully have edited the wording, IF I could have thought of suitable substitutes in the second example I posted (see post # 15). But that one had me stonkered. My thesaurus failed me. It's not too late, still. Would you have any suggestion for the three words highlighted in post # 15? Last edited by GrannyGrump; 08-11-2015 at 04:43 AM.