Thread: Why do Run-on sentences feel so right?
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Old 07-28-2015, 09:28 AM   #9
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Originally Posted by Dr. Drib View Post
None of it feels right to me.

The run-on sentences (for me) makes the reading feel choppy and disjointed.
On reflection, I agree. The run-on is choppy.
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