Thread: Why do Run-on sentences feel so right?
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Old 07-27-2015, 01:32 PM   #3
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(Original)
There was nothing friendly about her, she contained no softness, so why was she trying to help?

(1)
There was nothing friendly about her; she contained no softness. So why was she trying to help?

(2)
There was nothing friendly about her. She contained no softness: So why was she trying to help?

(3 - words added by me)
There was nothing friendly about her. She contained no softness, and that made me wonder: Why was she trying to help?
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