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Old 07-23-2015, 12:20 PM   #48
David910
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Originally Posted by issybird View Post
My reaction in reading this thread is to think it's probably a truism that the better the writer, the more likely he is to believe there's always room for improvement.
Hi issybird. I know there is some things to be improved in this novella, but any improvements would be for a future work, as I am not changing anything other than spelling errors/egregious grammar errors. But things that are a part of the style of the work, I'm not gonna change. I made a decision when I first started writing this that this was how this particular story needed to be written and I stand by that for this work. But, I am always open for changes to style for future works.

A reader of the novella said he/she would give me feedback and I sort of hinted that I already knew she would say it would be good if I reigned it in a bit. The reader actually responded saying that the style was actually enjoyable and that I didn't need to reign it in, in this regard, at all. Again, the novella seems to be pretty polarizing. Thanks for the response. - David

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