Thread: MobileRead July 2015 Discussion: Waterloo (spoilers)
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Old 07-21-2015, 10:03 PM   #5
issybird
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Can I say how much I dislike the shifts in tense, sometimes from sentence to sentence? It's jarring, taking me right out of the narrative.
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