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Originally Posted by David910
I really do challenge you to read "Silent and Abandoned". It's not your typical, every-day read, but I think it can really give context to what I am saying, and I really do think that you will enjoy it. - David
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Irritating as I found this repeated attempt at promotion, I took your challenge and read a little more. I found more grammatical errors, tense inconsistencies, numerals that should be spelled out... so I stopped again.
Honestly, it needs editing. A lot of editing. Plain and simple. I realise you want to hide this behind "style", but a lot of it is just wrong. The book is exactly what I expected from the cover.