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Old 07-19-2015, 12:50 AM   #14
David910
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Originally Posted by meeera View Post
I wouldn't, but I can't say whether someone else might. You only get one chance to make a first impression in an incredibly competitive market. There are a lot of other books out there that have been competently edited before publishing along with being terrific stories.
While I can't excuse the "it's" problems, most of the "grammar teacher" errors you are going to see in the novella are due to the unconventional style that I wrote the novella in. And I accept that not everyone is going to like the style because perhaps it seems a little more clustered to some.

And so, while I think you are missing out on a good story, I can't blame you for getting upset with the grammar and I wish you well!
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