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Old 07-19-2015, 12:20 AM   #11
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Originally Posted by David910 View Post
And that's the frustrating thing. I think the novella itself is high-quality work, but if a reader doesn't like something like the title or the cover, then they won't read it.
That's true: they're your advertisement for the book. A slapped-together cover says things like "I have also not had my book edited", whether or not that is true. Speaking of which, you have a comma splice in your second sentence and an apostrophe in possessive "its" in both your second and third paragraphs. I stopped there, and would not read further. I'm sorry, I'm not having a pointless or deliberate go at you, but pointing out something that I hope will be helpful.
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