Thread: Golden Age SF and a melancholy take on Walter Mitty
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Old 06-13-2015, 08:12 AM   #18
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I just finished reading your story and thoroughly enjoyed it.


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The way you handled the two story-lines and how they merged in the end was very artfully and skillfully accomplished.


Without trying to be condescending at all, I think you are a very skillful writer and that you should also attempt your hand at working on a novel.
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