Thread: "The Second Book of Memorable First Sentences From Books That Don't Exist"
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Old 05-11-2015, 11:34 AM   #211
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Originally Posted by ApK View Post
Oh come on, you can't just change a period to a comma and call it a sentence! At least make that first one a semicolon like everyone else does!

Good suggestion.....otherwise he has two sentences.

And nobody wants to read two sentences!
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