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Old 04-20-2015, 03:10 AM   #9
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Kasper, another issue with your description is that you start off in the present tense, and then switch to the past tense. That's wrong: stick to the same tense for the whole thing.

I'm afraid I must agree with those who have said that poor grammar and spelling means an instant "fail". Language is a writer's toolbox, and it's essential to know how to use those tools correctly.
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