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Old 03-14-2015, 06:55 AM   #8
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Originally Posted by Karbargenbok View Post
Interesting... I'd like to beta read it. I'm a writer myself -- worked as a copywriter for more than thirty years, and my own first novel is about to be published (in Dutch, I fear; I'm from Holland).

One small comment: īn the above fragment, "Tanner" appears to be a main character. Roger Zelazny's novel "Damnation Alley", also an SF-novel about outlaw biking, features a protagonist called "Hell Tanner".
Did you choose the name for that reason? If not, perhaps you'd want to change it.
That might have been a subconscious influence, in the same way Fat Brenda turned out to be a character in something else.
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