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Old 02-27-2015, 04:15 AM   #21864
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Present tense grates on me in general, but it has its uses. The indie author I'm currently working with is writing in past, but uses present for dream sequences. It's a neat approach, I think; the reader can tell something's off, even if they don't notice precisely what...
That does sound quite clever. I must admit to disliking first person present tense too. In current book of short stories I'm reading they're nearly all in first person present, even in flashbacks.

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Next up: The Ape's Wife by Caitlin R. Kiernan, another from the humble bundle.
I'm almost ready to abandon this one. I'm just not enjoying it very much, partly because of the first person present, and partly because the stories just don't grab me.
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