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Old 02-26-2015, 05:05 PM   #21853
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Originally Posted by Fbone View Post
The pronoun "I" was used 17 times in the first 4 paragraphs.
Isn't that fairly inevitable if an author writes in the first person? One of my pet hates is books that are written in the first person present, which seems to be distressingly common in "YA" books. I tried reading "The Hunger Games", having seen many people recommend it, but that was one of the things about it that really annoyed me.
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