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Blurb feedback?
It's for a Women's Fiction novel called The Test. Thanks.
It’s the last chance for law intern Mary Maloney. Twice she’s failed the bar exam and if she fails again, she’ll lose her job, her home, and her self-respect. Only love keeps her going, but that too seems to be slipping through her fingers.
Mary’s college sweetheart, Tom Falcone, has always been “the guy.” From a strict Italian-Catholic family, Tom is determined to carry on the family tradition of ‘one man, one woman, marriage and children,’ and marrying Mary fits right into his plan. But after an argument, his pride getting in the way, he breaks up with her and follows his dream to be a golf pro all the way to Thailand.
Alone and lonely Mary falls under the sway of her high-powered attorney boss. Mary knows soon enough she’s fooling herself—her boss is a player, and besides, Tom’s the only one for her. One little surprise gets in the way, though—after a New Year’s Eve penthouse party Mary attended with her boss a baby is soon to follow.
Tom returns from Thailand, repentant, affirming Mary’s his true love forever. Mary knows his dream of ‘one man, one woman, marriage and children’ will be shattered when she tells him her secret.
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