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gmw · 01-07-2015, 06:50 AM

I like the way she seems to be peering through the "e" of shutterstock

I pretty much agree with the other comments so far: the top needs to be a cold weather setting or a "cold, distant ..." story, the bottom might suit a warmer story or setting. I like the top image better if it fits the story. As already noted the "T" - if it is a "T" - is too exaggerated for comfortable reading.

I think you might have to see the image without "shutterstock" to really get a feel for the expression in the girl's eyes.

01-07-2015, 06:50 AM	#9
gmw cacoethes scribendi Posts: 5,818 Karma: 137770742 Join Date: Nov 2010 Location: Australia Device: Kobo Aura One & H2Ov2, Sony PRS-650	I like the way she seems to be peering through the "e" of shutterstock I pretty much agree with the other comments so far: the top needs to be a cold weather setting or a "cold, distant ..." story, the bottom might suit a warmer story or setting. I like the top image better if it fits the story. As already noted the "T" - if it is a "T" - is too exaggerated for comfortable reading. I think you might have to see the image without "shutterstock" to really get a feel for the expression in the girl's eyes.