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Old 01-06-2015, 02:20 PM   #2
Penforhire
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I like the first one better. Something about the wood color being at all similar to the hair color doesn't sit well with me, like a bad association. I thought I would like the second one more, as it leads the eye to your title along with the dock perspective. But my reaction is strictly emotional to the colors.

OT, I don't like the title font. The capital T stem is too swoopy for me, unless you are intentionally trying for a test/jest superposition.
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