Thread: Obscure book, by obscure author, very few & poor reviews, yet I'm really enjoying it.
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Old 12-03-2014, 09:46 PM   #17
Rizla
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Originally Posted by ShellShock View Post
Doesn't the double use of "between" strike you as odd?

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I've gotten stuck in the middle, between the parents who understandably want him back and between those who will keep Tristan locked away until their demands are met.
To me this means he is stuck between his parents, and also stuck between "those who will keep Tristan locked away".
I see what you mean. Fair point. But it didn't bother me on reading, and I think it's a very good blurb.
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