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Old 12-01-2014, 07:56 AM   #15
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Without meaning to sound ... whatever ... I don't much like any of them. There is no sense of depth or reality to images, I suspect the colour manipulations have taken that away. I find the colours (in the bowl) too messy/murky/confusing/distracting so that it is no longer obvious what the outer ring really is. If you really are looking to be a more abstract image then the centre one does it - the blues and green on the right I don't really like at all.

I like the idea of the one on the left best. If you could curve the font over so that it really looked like it was flowing with the water then that would look better and add a sense of depth to it ... though I wonder if we have to pull back a bit to really get a sense of what we're looking at.
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