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The neon text in #2 and #3 is kind of shlocky (which granted, you may be after) and as thumbnails I don't think it's readily apparent that they are toilets.
I like the first cover, perhaps for the wrong reasons beause of what you're looking for. It looks more professional and the blue is very pleasing. The name on the angle definitely looks like it's going down and it's intriguing. It's not clear that that's a toilet,though. From your title of course they'll figure it out soon enough,but if you want the initial glance to say "toilet" it won't. Especially being blue.
Do you really need your cover to be shlocky?
Personally I wouldn't give #2 or #3 a second glance when I saw the neon text. #1 I would be intrigued by.
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