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2nd tagline seems better oriented for a suspense book with a plucky heroine in it. It conveys the desperation and lengths she's willing to go to for her kid, but also has a double-meaning kind of hint for the eventual romance, both with the mobster and the ex-cop (I'm assuming that her maybe-love does not turn the heart of the mobster), IMHO.
1st tagline seems more of a "rescue romance" kind of thing where it's like the guy swoops in to save the day (of course, that might better reflect the actual story if that is indeed the case of him following her after something goes wrong).
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