Thread: Obscure book, by obscure author, very few & poor reviews, yet I'm really enjoying it.
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Old 11-24-2014, 02:23 PM   #8
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Agreed with your suggestions, but for me it [the loose wording of the snippet] creates an informal feel. We can become too stuffy and formal in our writing, and it really depends what you're going for.
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