Hi everyone,
I would just like to start off by saying thank you for reading my thread. I am an 18 year old college student studying I.T but I also believe that I have a story worth telling.
I want to write it in 3rd person and about someone who goes through his childhood fighting depression, anger issues, Diabetes and losing one of his brothers and his father. I have still not decided on a title but I have started a rough paragraph.
If you could kindly take a look through it and give me some pointers as to what needs to be included etc I would very gladly appreciate it!
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A happy family. Every young childs dream. Smiles all around, glimmering from one face to the next. Emmiting the natural love that familys share within.
Except, this wasnt always the case with young Thomas Buellas. Very far from it. Living in the hollow slums deep into Tinver Town, Thomas was a bright, hopeful boy, will plenty to aspire to. Despite the fact that he was diagnosed with Type 1 Diabetes, he soldiers on through fire, because he wants to thrive. However, his family on the other hand, were locked in battle every night, a test of strength, horns clashed together and the bulls were fiesty.
Mother and Father, violently arguing, with the smashing of various objects. This wasnt an abnormality for Thomas, but never the less each night upsets him more and more until one night... he finally cracked
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