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Old 10-25-2014, 06:26 AM   #2
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I freely admit that my Cantonese and Mandarin are both extremely rusty (and never all that good to begin with, TBH), and probably someone else can explain it a lot better, but I'm getting the impression that you may be expecting a 1-to-2-word imperative the way that English does it (i.e. Leave! or Wake up!), while Chinese instead tends to do these multi-word imperative sentences (for conversational use, at least), which often end with word-particles (啦 in Cantonese, 吧 ba in Mandarin), usually include an object or adverb along with the imperative verb (or use what amounts to a conceptually compound verb to express a single action), and sometimes include a pronoun as well.

So for a Mandarin-ish feel, perhaps make your commands multi-word and consistently end them with the same particle.

(Also, I highly recommend Mark Rosenfelder's The Language Construction Kit for useful tips on creating your invented language, and Wikipedia has a decent summary write-up on Mandarin grammar which may be of help to you.

Of course, if you really want to give it a consistent accurate basis, one of the best real-world concise explanations of Mandarin, IMHO, is the Routledge Grammar series' Chinese: An Essential Grammar volume by Yip Po-Ching & Don Rimmington (linkage to Amazon, where you can browse the Look Inside previews), which you may be able to obtain via your local library.)

Hope this helps.
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