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Commenting as a reader, not a writer: I'm not sure I understand it. Admittedly, English isn't my first language, but I read it quite a lot, and don't usually have problems figuring out what's going on. As far as I can tell, your poem goes something like this:
Narrator: Here's an imp who's going to abduct someone.
Imp: Hey, sage, I want to dump a lady and need courage.
Sage: Women are bad.
Imp: Some women are good.
Sage: No, seriously, women are really bad.
Imp: OK, you've convinced me.
This confuses me, mostly because dumping someone is pretty much the opposite of abducting them.
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