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Originally Posted by HarryT
1. Rhyming couplets are about the "twee-est" form of poetry around. I'd suggest choosing a more interesting metrical pattern. But good on you for having a meter! The fashion today seems to be to write prose, split the lines in random places, and claim that it's poetry. Writing to a meter is much more challenging, and the result much more interesting to read.
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A guide on
choosing a more interesting metrical pattern would be nice. Do you have any guide ebooks to suggest?
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Originally Posted by HarryT
2. Pretty much all your semicolons really should be commas.
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Thanks for that, and thank you for reviewing the whole composition.