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Originally Posted by Gregg Bell
Thanks gmw. I didn't see the potential interpretation of the second sentence as you did. I would lean more toward accepting that if the second sentence started its own paragraph. But as it is it is influenced by the first statement, which is all about the rights they are offering me, which implies it, as well, is about those selfsame rights.
And I read the "literary brilliance" as an attempt at humor. The whole tone of the statement was loose and hip.
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You may be right about it being an attempt at humor, but does humor really have a place in a legal contract? That's what a publisher offers when they want to print something and to include humor in a legal document doesn't seem the most professional to me.