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Originally Posted by pshrynk
I'm struggling a bit with trying to figure the ages of the children. I think if you were to spend some verbage on developing ages a bit more, it would benefit the tale by slowing down the shifts form one character to another, allowing for us to get a better feel for who is who.
Fast development of premise, however. I'm guessing a Quest Tale with a fellowship of at least three youngsters and the wizard cornelius? Maybe to free the Princess?
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That is merely a background, and it skips years ahead for the actual book after these and one more. I am still working on more details for the first one maybe two background paragraphs. The bigger spaces separate the separate the different background stories.