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Originally Posted by alansplace
Check out this paragraph from the beginning of the FanFic story, Harry Potter and the Winter Court. It almost stopped me from reading the rest of it... arggghhh!
Of course the bold items aren't the only criticisms that can be levied at that paragraph, in my mind they're just the most egregious.
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"Harry looked like he belonged on the set of a western."
Of a western?? OF A WESTERN??
If you're gonna steal from the original, use the original!
He belongs on the set of El Dorado!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And as if he could move Bob without Bob knowing. Gah!