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Originally Posted by alansplace
Check out this paragraph from the beginning of the FanFic story, Harry Potter and the Winter Court. It almost stopped me from reading the rest of it... arggghhh!
Of course the bold items aren't the only criticisms that can be leved at that paragraph, in my mind they're just the most egregious.
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I read all the chapters. There are quite a few discrepancies. I kept reading anyway mostly because Alan warned us in his post providing the links. If you can ignore the discrepancies it is an interesting story as far as it goes.