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Old 05-21-2014, 03:41 PM   #224
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Originally Posted by Hitch View Post
Can anyone remind me what the phrasing was that was off-putting? (To save me having to re-read a huge chunk of this thread?????)

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Too many ("several dozen" in just the first book) occurrences of "stretched his legs" instead of walking, IIRC, if that's the one you meant.
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