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Originally Posted by Rev. Bob
Here's the current draft of the license text, and I'm certainly open to suggestions:
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At a glance, I would absolutely cut it as below (as I bet you could have predicted by now!).
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You may transfer this ebook to another person by giving one copy to the new owner and destroying any and all other copies you may have made. Doing so transfers all of your rights to the recipient.
The author explicitly retains all of the rights granted under established copyright laws. If you’re reading this book and did not purchase it, or it was not given to you under the provision above, please visit your favorite ebook retailer and purchase your own copy there. Thank you for respecting the hard work of this author.
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See what I did there?
Those words I cut....if you think people won't understand your intent unless you use them....save them for your marketing materials, keep them out of the actual license terms!
BTW, in case it was lost in the arguments, I really like what you're trying to do!
ApK