Thread: MobileRead Short Story Anthology - [DISCUSSION & REVIEW]
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Old 04-30-2014, 03:13 PM   #232
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Planting the Flag v1.4
I realize you've declared it final, but . . .-)

Spoiler:
Now there is no indication that ". . . don't hit too hard" is a joke.

Following ". . . always some bad things happening." with "Let's hope so." sounds odd. I know you mean "Let's hope that's all it is." but it doesn't come out that way.


It makes a good story, Graham.

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