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Old 03-24-2014, 01:42 PM   #211
mrmarlowe
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When My Father Died

Sir Graham,

When My Father 'Died' - v.2-1 is up. Could you please read it one more time. I think the original ending was a little corny so I removed much of the stuff and ended with a question. Let me know if it works better? (well actually I 'copied' you somewhat, verbatim)

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