Thread: MobileRead Short Story Anthology - [DISCUSSION & REVIEW]
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Old 03-21-2014, 04:01 PM   #203
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Originally Posted by arjaybe View Post
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That would be good, but I also like the moral ambiguity of fear stopping her from doing the cliche thing that everyone expects. The ensuing guilt contributes to her subsequent breakdown. Maybe I'll have to mention the guilt.

Jim
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The problem is that we lose sympathy for her because she makes no attempt to save her child.


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